Tomorrow we return to your normally scheduled broadcasting.Also known as "Learning in a controlled environment".
This means an end to the homework-less days,
Of hanging out after school,
And care-freely doing nothing of significance.
I hate to see it go.
I miss playing my electric guitar already.
The first string snapped off of it yesterday and smacked my hand
And scared me,
And I don't trust myself to restring the thing.
It's already bothering me that it doesn't have one string on.
Is that going to drastically effect the pressure placed on the neck?
I feel like a total newb.
I don't have a clue as to what I'm doing.
Poor guitar,
Placed very ill-advisedly into my caretaking.
There's not a thing wrong with my very-old acoustic,
It's just
Strange.
The strings are awfully bulky and bright
In comparison to the smooth and mellow electric strings.
It's bothering me.
Enough, enough.
It seemed I has something to say,
Something of significance, perhaps?
I doubt it.
Although,
I am now severely questioning
How deep my poetry is.
It all seems very surface-level, I'm just barely skimming the surface
Of the lake that is poetry.
My rock is skipping madly across the surface.
How can I manipulate human emotion in poetry?
How can poetry manipulate human emotion?
I was reading some work today,
And the back cover stated that the authors stopped writing at 19.
Yet he had produced a beautiful piece about life. Human life,
It was called "A Season in Hell"
I want to read the whole thing.
I also want, desperately, in fact, to make my mediocre work
Into something
Heart-wrenching
And 'true'.
By 'true',
I mean true to the art and whatever the subject is.
It's hard to explain what I wish to gain here.
Have a (probably mediocre) poem:
The Expedition
In the countryside,
Lurks a barren sea.
Green waving blades,
Tickled by the sunshine.
-
As along the waves we walk,
Completely lost in the winds,
And the changing tide
As crickets ricochet
Off the flying tendrils
Of green sea,
Singing a quiet
Sea shanty,
That we, too, whistle
As we are carried off
In the sea.
-
The sky above the only break from
The rolling green,
That mocks us,
As if to say
We are not sailors,
But botanists.
In a boat
Not fit to sail the white waves.
But a boat made to sail
In the meadows.
-
Wildflowers,
Blue and purple,
Yellow.
In our hair,
Crowns of dead sea creatures,
The spoils of our expedition,
As we roll along the hills.
-
I crown you king of sea and air,
As you steer our course north-westernly.
Slicing through the grappling blades,
-
Slick again in the morning fog.
So green is our only horizon,
Us botanist-sailors
Tromp through the knee-high
Waves.
Watching for slithering companions
On the sandy floor.
Ripples from the surface,
Carried down.
-
At last, we come to see a shoal,
A harbour for our safety.
I lay down my butterfly-whaling net,
And you lie down in the dunes,
As we watch the sky pass,
Surrounded by the country's sea,
Shimmering silvery underneath
Cloudless, endless domain.
You and I,
Conquerers of the sea.
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